If you're in love

Sometimes I find poetry that I wrote.

Notes:

1. First line should be underlined.
2. The omission of an apostrophe in "youre" is deliberate.
3. "Pretend like" should be hyphenated with an invisible hyphen.
4. That there are two "ough"s in the fourth line is not a coincidence.
5. I probably should have said 'breast' instead of 'chest' but it's 2011 and this is impossible.
6. I'm not sure that voids can have 'depth'. Worth discussing in a classroom setting.
7. There is an invisible space between the 'can' and 'not' of 'cannot'.
8. I should have spelled out 'tv' as 'teevee' but it's 2011 and this would be laughable.
9. "And deny though you will" Note the author's repeated use of 'though'. Hmmm...
10. I should have used 'whole' instead of 'hole'.
11. I should have used 'youre' instead of 'your'.
12. That does in fact say "unmindedly".
13. "To wade into the interminable depths" To be recited in a poly-rhythmic style.
14. "But that's only of course" is arguably the worst line in the poem. (Or is it?)
15. The second last line is the same as the first line of the poem.
16. The last line is the same as the fourth line of the poem and the last line of the poem and this is not a coincidence.